CLG Entertainment Is Getting Revamped!

And you can see it at the site, http://clg-entertainment.com/.

This blogger site will stay live as it houses nearly 100 articles I've written or directs you to those articles on other sites.

Come see the new CLG-E. Good stuff is coming to CLG-E in 2013 and beyond!

Limited Editorial Services for CLG Entertainment

As of February 1, 2013, I will be limiting my editorial services to a small set of longstanding clientele. Freed-up time and energy will be channeled into personal literary endeavors. 

How I Come to the Page as Editor

I think of editing as a series of teachable moments - my goal is to help the writer develop the best product s/he can. I fix changes, yes, but ultimately, I hope to provide information on how to fix changes so that in revisions and in future works, the author becomes a better writer because s/he has learned. In the editing process, I try to do this in three ways: Tracked Changes to fix grammatical, mechanical, and structural issues; Comments that relay to story-related issues, and Comments that I call "readerly comments".

Tracked Changes
These are the things clients typically expect to see fixed. Any issues with grammar, mechanics, structure (commas inside quotation marks, moving taglines to middle of long dialogue passages, etc.). These are typically accepted by the client overall when s/he receives her/his edited manuscript from me.

Comments Regarding Story-Related Issues
While having a clean copy (what's done in Tracked Changes) is cool, none of that matters if the story itself is not strongly written. I use comments to talk about story-related issues, such as underdeveloped characters, holes in the plot, weak development of tension, superficial dialogue, and weak beginnings and endings to chapters and/or scenes. This is primarily where teachable moments come into play. Typically, I will stop at the point of issue and write a comment that: 1) tells the client of the issue, 2) explain why I see it as an issue, and 3) provide suggestion(s) on how to fix the issue. This is where the bulk of my time goes, especially in a first edit because like I said, if the story is weak, grammar and mechanics are the least of a client's problems.

Readerly Comments
As I edit, I attempt to be "the average reader" of a client's book. And just like when readers wants to yell at a character, toss a book because it's irritating them, laugh out loud because something is so funny, or sob because they are touched, I like to illustrate those moments in the editing/reading of a book. In the past, I see these at times as comic relief for the client. Many of them contact me, laughing, because those comments were so funny. However, they do serve another purpose. If I'm laughing in a spot that's not intended to be funny, that relays something to the client and makes her/him have to consider what to do about it. If I loathe a character to the point of not wanting to read the book and the client actually wants you to like the character, then the client needs to consider what changes might need to be made. So, in the end, while the comments I make tend to be funny (because they are so off the cuff), they can be instructive, too.

What Clients Have to Say

I'm always happy when clients enjoy the work I do for them. I am a lover of writing, and I love helping writers to strengthen their stories. Here are a few words from current clients about their experiences with me. Want to know more about what clients have to say about me? Then check out the link Clients Say... on the bar above!

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Shonell's work was truly a gift to me. She thoroughly and professionally edited my manuscript within the promised timeframe. Her review of the work was insightful. In addition to fixing grammer, Shonell pointed out several places where my manuscript could be improved (to be clearer to the reader) and even provided concrete suggestions for how. Shonell being a writer herself made the whole experience easy.

~Rachel Coyne, author of Whiskey Heart





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Shonell provides expert editing services that can take any book to the next level. I have always left inspired and seeing my written words in a refreshed way. She is personable and pays attention to those little details. Shonell met my expectations (they are usually ridiculously high). I have used her services more than once and have never regretted it. I look forward to her being a part of my growing team.

~Maryann Reid, Award-winning author and TV/radio social commentator





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Shonell has provided editing services for two books with Branchrystine Publishing. In doing so, she enabled the author to assemble a well thoughtout manuscript, challenging the author to answer the 5 W's of Who, What, When, Why, Where to make certain the reader would have a coherent portrayal of the storyline. Shonell's provided consistent, constructive criticism to create improved writing habits in future manuscripts. She completed the project ahead of schedule, providing a comprehensive overview on the quality of manuscript, what a reader may interpret from manuscript, and meticulous corrections, suggestions on subject-verb agreements, grammar and punctuation. I plan to continue to use her services in future endeavors.

~Tyrenna Tolbert, author of Who's Got Skills





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Thank you, Ms. Shonell Bacon, for breathing life into my manuscript. I found your editorial services to be both professional and cost efficient. Your quick turnaround time is also a plus. With your expertise, I expect great things from my novel From Hard to Hallelujah! I'll be calling you for the next one and the next one and the next one. God's Blessings, Lela Gholar Tizano

CLG Entertainment Offering Editorial Specials Now 'Til August 1!

For nine years, Shonell Bacon and CLG Entertainment has assisted writers in developing their craft through editorial, evaluation, and coaching services.

And now, from April 25 to August 1, Shonell is bringing her editorial services to clients--at a major discount.

Any work over 100 pages (25,000 words+) can save up to 50% on CLG Entertainment's already inexpensive fees.

Past, present, and repeat clients value what Shonell brings to their literary projects...


She was professional and prompt. Her keen eye, unique insight and constructive criticism made My Name Is Butterfly the gem of a novel it is today. I highly recommend her! ~Bernice L. McFadden, author of Sugar and Glorious

 Shonell Bacon is Proactive, Productive and Professional. Ms. Bacon is a true blessing to the literary world. Her direct and thorough approach to editing allows the author a candid retrospective into their novel. Shonell incorporates recommendations, options and understanding of the novel via her editorial services. Shonell Bacon is a diamond in the rough. ~Sharmina T. Ellis, Vice President, 5ive Star Publications

Shon's editorial skills reflect consistency as she has a keen eye for detail to go along with her knowledge of the English language. Bearing the understanding of a novel's fluidity, her constructive criticism boosted my perspective of polishing my work more efficiently. Even when two hurricanes rocked Southeastern Texas and her home-base of Louisiana in the same month, she still managed to communicate with me in regards to finishing the edits to my novel. That's the epitome of dedication and professionalism. ~King Dhakir, author of I Hate My Job



If you are looking to shape up a project right now for publication or for submitting to agents and publishing houses, you definitely need to check out CLG Entertainment. At the website (http://www.clg-entertainment.com), you can learn about Shonell's editing philosophy, read what other clients have said about her, and more.

And if you're ready to take that jump and make your writing stand OUT in a crowd, then you can contact Shonell directly at sdb6812@hotmail.com to learn about CLG-E's special fees!